However, the lack of depth and the lack of new thought reduce the significance level of this posting substantially. As a reader, I gain nothing from this post -- no insight and no sense of having learned something new. Ultimately, significance derives from the creation of something that is not only temporally relevant but is lasting in its profundity, and I do not see that here.
Precision reflects the degree to which the author clearly elucidates his or her views. In this case, those views are relatively precise, if threadbare. The author is clear enough at times -- "I truly agree with Howard Gardner…" -- and explains his/her point about dividing into different parts the materials by explaining those different parts in sequences. In this respect, despite the overall poor quality of the message, the message is relatively precise.
Breadth is an issue with this posting. The shotgun approach has been used here -- mentioning multiple readings without any attempt to tie of them together. The paragraphs do not flow from one to another, and there is no attempt to tie them together either in the introduction or the conclusion. So what little breadth there is remains merely superficial. Breadth should be reflected in the author covering a wide range of ground, with depth, and then tying all of the points to the central argument.
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