¶ … Job-Application Letter
There are several positive aspects of the letter reviewed within this assignment and which will be evaluated herein. It is obvious from even a cursory read of this document that the author is very confident and fairly talented. However, there is a thin line between confidence and overstepping one's boundaries, and there are a few places in the letter in which the author's approach could stand some restructuring and re-phrasing to emphasize a greater degree of professionalism. By adhering to a more formal format for this cover letter, it is not improbable that the author could obtain the position that he desires.
Still, the basic structure of the letter itself is commendable. The fact that the author has written this on letterhead with his contact information at the top is beneficial, and he follows the general structure for a business letter nicely, including leaving a space between the "Sincerely" and his name to sign it. Still, it appears that his introductory remarks are a little less formal, and somewhat more maundering, than they should be. The author begins the letter by asserting that "It was with great interest that I read your recent posting in the Times for an IT Security Specialist. Managing large-scale security projects requires a unique blend of expertise in strategic planning, process development and leadership…"
The author should abandon the conversational, peer-like approach of the first sentence, which is typified by...
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I then acknowledged that I had already been notified of the status of my application and that the negative outcome was largely my own doing. I didn't elaborate on the offensive behavior I displayed because I thought it would lead to the letter becoming more personal than business like. Finally, I closed the letter by wishing the recipient the best. Overall, I wanted the letter to sound uncontrived and
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.....company thrive, I seek a high-powered sales position in the aviation and aeronautics sector. Experience Boeing 2010-Present Exceeded performance objectives by building a team of five sales associates to exceed yearly target by 15%. Presented sales results annually at the Boeing company conference. Built relationships with five key clients in both public and private sector. Alaska Airlines 2008-2010 Over the course of two years, progressed from being a junior sales associate to being a regional
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Cover letterDear Hiring Manager,I am writing to express my interest in the Licensed Practical Nurse position at your healthcare facility. As a highly motivated and experienced nurse, I am excited about the opportunity to gain more experience in the healthcare field and contribute to the success of your team.I hold an Associate of Science in Nursing from Essex County College and am licensed and certified in practical nursing, as well
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