College Is Done and Student

¶ … college is done and student loans are due. It paints a very realistic picture because for most students is hard to find job after college or any job that can pay for the students loans that have been collected over the years. Before it gets to this point, most students foolishly believe that they will obtain a job that will cover these loans. The paper addresses that this leads to a high financial debt that students find very hard to pay back in a reasonable time. The paper correctly explains that the behavior of students outside the classroom depends somewhat upon their relationships with the student loans and employment because, after all, they are the ones who were in place so that students could have a bright future.

I like how the author enforces that this situation is inevitable that behaviors of students after college in a way depends on their debt to student loans and success in finding a job. This fits with the fact that studies have shown students struggle depression because they are in debt and cannot find employment. Scholars argue whether this is the implication of the alienation to students who form the mainstream population or just one of the effects of being drenched in a multicultural society. Therefore, it would help if students would be inform of the possible debt and unemployment after college before seeking out student loans to pay for school.

Additionally, the paper brings out that studies show students are more pessimistic after college than any other students and are more likely to anticipate possible problems in their employment ventures. This insinuates that they are more inclined towards avoidance of future maladies, and thus they always tend to play their affairs safe. Students after college are prone to health problems as aftereffects of their depression and pessimism, not to mention persistent recurrences of inferiority complex, which may interfere with their achievement in getting employment and in this case, student loans laws should be change where students have a longer grace to pay back the loans.

The thesis statement was made clearer by the author because the main points of writing were structured very well. Before the author was structured with the ideas, it was a rough draft and it shows that they took the time polish the paper up. Along with that, instead of using direct quotes, the author paraphrased to convey their ideas better. For example, if the author wrote any paragraph at first, leaving as a direct quote, it can make the essay choppy.