¶ … clean up the references. There are comments in them that should not be there. On the reference to "Knight Foundation," there is a comment that this should not be used as a source. That's true, but the entire sentence is redundant so you may as well remove that. On the ideas in the problem statement, the study itself is not entirely clear. While the basic premise that there barriers to mentorship for women and minorities has almost certainly been studied in academic research, the problem statement does not suggest a particular thread for the paper. The framing of the problem as "look at the plight of such groups" is not action-oriented. Does this mean you are going to read a book about it? What are you specifically going to study -- propose a research question that will allow you to answer a single, specific question. On the significance, what you have is a good start. You should go beyond this, however, and I suspect when you get a more specific research question you will be able to go beyond this. Right now, you are saying the same thing three ways. What I mean is that you feel the research is significant because this is something that needs to be talked about. That's only sort of true. For your research to be genuinely significant, you will be able to add knowledge that we do not already have. So the research should get into more detail about something, or ask a new question, or look at...
The research will be significant if it adds something new to the existing body of scholarship on this issue.
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The UAE-Japan Environment & Renewable Energy CollaborationIntroductionThe United Arab Emirates (UAE) and Japan have forged a strong partnership in the fields of environment and renewable energy, setting a precedent for international collaboration. This paper explores the various dimensions of this partnership, highlighting key projects, initiatives, and areas of cooperation. It also presents an argument on how this collaboration has not only contributed to the sustainable development goals of both nations
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