Tshcinag and Groddeck
What drew me to the poem? I am always curious and fascinated at poetic mysteries. That is, what is the poet really talking about? What line or lines offers a clue (or clues) to the purpose of the poem? The post itself is somewhat confusing and even vague. "The only thing that comes to mind is that it's about abuse between a father and a boy," the post explains. I will try to evaluate and critique the post along with the poem.
The post offers some interesting approaches to understanding the poem. But while I agree that the father apparently doesn't know what the boy is thinking or seeing, and doesn't really relate to the boy's feelings, I don't immediately relate to the assertion that the father is the abuser. I'm not saying it isn't possible that the father is the abuser but when the father says, "Come now, or seize you is what I'll do," that is a possible opening to abuse.
The statement in the blog that poems "…need to have a souls and a spirit,"...
drew you to the post to which you are responding -- a particular insight, way of writing, or question being asked. Be generous and name what you find engaging about the post. Ask questions that invite clarification or further discussion. Contribute your own thoughts and experiences where appropriate. The writer seems to me curious and engaged with life. He seems to be drawn to nature and to seeing below the surface. From a
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