Simile -- A common device in poetry is the use of comparisons, often comparing something unusual or uncommon with something that is more familiar to the reader or audience. One kind of comparison is the simile, which uses the words like or as and compares two things that are dissimilar in order to bring about a fresh view and new meaning.
An example of a simile that does this is found in Margaret Atwood's "You fit into me," in which she describes the fit of two lovers to each other as "like a hook into an eye." The reader imagines a hook and eye on the band of a skirt or the back of a bra, but then Atwood changes the significance of the simile by becoming more specific. She adds the explanation "A fish hook ... An open eye." The extended simile creates a very painful image of being a woman stuck with someone who isn't good for her, who perhaps abuses her, or even rapes her. Not everyone has had such a relationship or been the victim of an unpleasant or painful sexual experience, but most people know that a fishhook has a barb on it that tears the flesh when it is pulled out. And everyone knows that the eye is particularly sensitive, valuable to one's survival, and important to one's appearance and identity. So a fishhook pulled from a human eye would leave a lasting injury with blurred or damaged vision, constant watering, pain, disfigurement, etc. Damage to the substance of the eye is a violent image. Whatever the experience of the relationship was, it was traumatic, caused enormous pain, and extended grief and tears.
Metaphor -- Two kinds of comparisons are used in poetry. One is the simile, just discussed, the other is metaphor, which is like a condensed form of simile or comparison, in which the words like and as are not used, but the poet goes straight to the meaning. An example of a metaphor is found in Emily Dickinson's poem "Wild Nights -- Wild Nights!" In the poem she wistfully imagines what it would be like to be with the man she loves -- wildly passionate and luxurious. In the second stanza she juxtaposes this image against contrasting images of safety. She places herself and her lover in a safe port while a storm at Sea is taking place outside where it cannot harm them ("Futile -- the Winds -- To a Heart in port). She is not "at Sea" anymore ("Done with the Compass -- Done with the Chart!") but safe in the arms of the beloved. "At Sea" may be a metaphor for indecision or for emotional tumult, or both.
In the last stanza the poet uses the Sea again as a metaphor but this time a more peaceful one (like the afterglow of lovemaking) in which rowing is taking place in the placid waters of Paradise: "Rowing in Eden -- Ah, the Sea!" The Sea is a very apt metaphor for passion because waves rise and fall as passion does. When the Sea is agitated, it is very exciting and tumultuous, and these words could be applied equally well to human beings when they are aroused sexually. Moreover, the ocean is powerful and uncontrollable, which implies that the poet's passion would carry her away. A metaphor, like a condensed kernel or seed, grows into more meaning; in fact, its significance develops and blooms in a way that pages of prose could not. Metaphor says things prose cannot say and remain open to the development of interpretation.
Personification - Another poetic device is personification in which something that is not human, an animal, thing, or phenomenon is spoken to or about as though it were a person. In his poem "Death Be Not Proud," John Donne speaks of death as though death were a prideful, mortal man whom he (the poet) intends to take down a notch from his loftiness. Death is not a human being, of course, but an experience which some people (poet included) see as transitional from one stage of existence to another ("One short sleep past, we wake eternally,"). But because so many people are afraid of death, the poet personifies death in order to show that the concept of death has been overblown and invested with power that it does not really have -- like a man who has grown "too big for his britches," he speaks directly to death: "Death, be not proud, though some have called thee mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;" and then goes on to say that...
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