¶ … Noiseless Patient Spider Read "A Noiseless Patient Spider." By Walt Whitman

Then list the repeated words from both parts of the poem

As indicated by the question, the poem is comprised of two fairly short paragraphs. There are two words that are obviously repeated in the first stanza and those would be "mark'd" and "filament." The words of the second stanza that stand out are "surrounded," "till" and "O my soul." "

Then, jot a note or two about why you think the poet used repetition.

In the case of "filament" that is clear a reference to the fact that an actual spider web is an array of many, many threads of spider silk. The use of "mark'd" is probably a reference to how significant this spider's practice is given its vast surroundings and how it continues about its business of spinning webs. In the second stanza, the focus on the vast space is continued but the repeated word become "surrounded." He is saying much the same thing in both stanzas but in a different and unique way.

What effect does the repetition have on a reader?

Some may differ, but Whitman seems to be using the repetition as a way to make a focal point and to deliver a theme. Both stanzas point to the vastness of the space as compared to the size of the spider. There is also a clear focus on the repeated, methodical and uninterrupted manner in which the spider behaves.

What effect does the repetition have on you?

Beyond the obvious, the author of this response compare the size of humans to the vastness of space and the universe. Perhaps that was Whitman's point (or part of it) given his use of the word "spheres." "

Journal - Whitman

Whitman sets the scene with the title and a few words and then pounds on particular words so as to get the reader's focus where he wants it. His use of repetition in concert with his repeated focus on the vastness of the spider's domain is obvious. One sterling example is where it says "surrounded, surrounded in measureless oceans of space." He is basically saying that the...

This is coupled with phrases like "ceaselessly musing, venturing, throwing." This is referencing how the spider continues working and working with no apparent resting point. In short, he is in a vast area that is beyond is perception but yet he works incessantly throwing his webs. In conclusion, the spider is a tireless worker in spite of being in the presence of an never-ending space and amount of work.
Walden

Next, jot a few of the words you marked.

"clothing of mist," "soft ripples," "smooth reflecting surface"

What feeling or mood do they create?

The scene depicted is one of nature and it is serene, beautiful and scenic.

Is the description mellow, calming, agitated, tense, mysterious?

The description, using those words as options, is very mellow and calming. Some might point to the mystery but no obvious mystery is given other than perhaps what the mist and such is hiding. There is certainly no modicum of tension or agitation, at least based on the overall passage presented.

In terms of an overall topic, this passage from Walden is a representation of a nature scene but it is depicted in a way that indicates the scene is alive or at least changing in obvious ways. For example, when Thoreau says "while the mists, like ghost, we're steadily withdrawing in every direction" speaks to a receding of the fog from the area. That is a natural and normal thing in such an area but Thoreau puts a supernatural spin by speaking of ghosts and he also is conspicuous with his use of the word "we're." Another passage from the short clip would be " ... dew seemed to hang upon the trees later into the day than usual." This points to the idea that the day is unique in that it has deviated from its usual pattern. In closing, Thoreau is taking what a common scientist would deem to be a normal nature scene given the surroundings and adding some life, personality and variability to it all.

A Noiseless Patient Spider

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