Verified Document

Janice Mirikitani Suicide Note Poetry Analysis Essay

“not good enough not pretty enough not smart enough” are the words that echo and persist throughout Janice Mirikitani’s poem “Suicide Note.” The literal title of Mirikitani’s poem alerts the reader to the tragic ending, which the speaker claims is a result of her being psychologically abused by her parents. An angry tone pervades “Suicide Note,” laden with bitterness and sarcasm. The speaker even uses the word “bitter” to emphasize her sullen state of mind. The concrete details that stand out the most in “Suicide Note” include the use of repetition and the emphasis on the speaker’s gender. The speaker has internalized her parents’ disapproval, but it remains unclear whether her parents were earnestly pushing her to try harder or if they were, as she suggests, prejudicing her for her gender. “If only I were a son, shoulders broad...I would see the light in my mother’s eyes, or the golden pride reflected in my father’s dream of my wide, male hands worthy of work and comfort.” The speaker also claims that her “choices” in life were “thin as shaved ice.” The reader of “Suicide Note” wonders if the speaker is imagining that her parents wished she were a boy or if...

Ending the poem with “breast of earth” further stresses its gendered implications. Her death signifies reunion with mother earth, whereas the speaker’s biological mother failed to provide her with the nurturing she needed.
The fact that the poem is designed to mirror a suicide note compounds the tragedy because the speaker becomes a self-fulfilling prophesy. Her parents never showed her the approval she was seeking, but killing herself only makes them believe more that she was a “failure” and a “disappointment.” While her parents are likely to feel guilty at the tragedy of her death, they may not believe as she did that their parenting style was the problem. Comparing herself to a sparrow throughout the poem also shows that the speaker believed that she was actually capable of flying—of being free—but she continues to blame her parents. The reason why she was unable to fly only becomes clear later in the poem, when the speaker states, “the snow burdens my crippled wings.” The snow symbolizes the coldhearted claims of being “not good enough not strong enough not smart enough.” Therefore, “Suicide Note” could inspire readers to change their attitudes towards children and help…

Sources used in this document:

Works Cited

Mirikitani, Janice. “Suicide Note.” https://thevalueofsparrows.com/2015/01/14/poetry-suicide-note-by-janice-mirikitani/


Cite this Document:
Copy Bibliography Citation

Related Documents

Poetry Analysis of "And the Sun Still
Words: 1017 Length: 3 Document Type: Essay

Poetry Analysis of "And the Sun Still Dared to Shine" The Holocaust during World War II is one of the best documented and most horrendous periods of human existence. There have been other times in history where as many were senselessly killed in a short amount of time, but never have they been subjected to all of the horrors to which the Jews in the concentration camps were participants. A book

Poetry Analysis "True Love" Wislawa Szymborska "Acquainted
Words: 543 Length: 2 Document Type: Essay

Poetry analysis "True Love" Wislawa Szymborska "Acquainted Night" Robert Frost Wislawa Szymborska's "True Love" Wislawa Szymborska's poem "True Love" is initially likely to induce feelings related to simplicity and to the overall impression that love is overrated. However, upon second reading and a more in-depth analysis, one is probable to discover that the poet was concerned about putting across a more complex message -- one that relates to the benefits of love

Poetry As Social Challenge in
Words: 2057 Length: 6 Document Type: Term Paper

At this point, the emerging women's movement during the 1960s provided Rich with the ratification she needed. The movement articulated the very feelings of conflict she was experiencing on a personal, sexual and cultural level. This also allowed her to participate in a dialogue with her environment via the platform developed by the social movements arising during this time. Whereas her first poetry was therefore formal and unemotional, both her

Poetry Captures Both the Personal and the
Words: 655 Length: 2 Document Type: Essay

Poetry captures both the personal and the political, and it allows for collective exploration of an internal psychic world. The poet shares an internal psychic world by clocking emotional forms into language. Poetry appeals to our need to understand ourselves and the universe by using an art form of metaphor and semantics in much the same way that a musician uses notes, chords, and harmonies. It is to this service

Poetry Has Often Been an
Words: 1628 Length: 4 Document Type: Term Paper

" (lines 20-21) the journalist, the activist... must be the observer and not make the news. Lastly the point-of-view of the unnamed dead, "enemy" whose ears were cut off to use an example of cruelty and to elicit fear, "Some of the ears on the floor/caught this scrap of his voice. Some of the ears on / the floor were pressed to the ground." (lines 31-33) Perhaps the ears were

Poetry Is Often Used to Express Emotion
Words: 1237 Length: 3 Document Type: Term Paper

Poetry is often used to express emotion at its most romantic and infatuated, but sometimes it is used to describe the pillars of life behind that romance -- the sexuality, insecurity, devotion, and fidelity. Dorianne Laux, Anne Bradstreet, and Barbara Greenberg explore their very different relationships through poetry, examining this causal underpinnings through poetry. Using careful word choice, expressive imagery, and specific audience, each poet expertly wields her tool to

Sign Up for Unlimited Study Help

Our semester plans gives you unlimited, unrestricted access to our entire library of resources —writing tools, guides, example essays, tutorials, class notes, and more.

Get Started Now