¶ … structure and content of the outline met the objectives of the assignment. I narrowed down the topic further to differentiate between Angelou and Cisneros because I recognized that Angelou sends her readers an optimistic message of self-empowerment, while Cisneros opts to use the medium of traditional storytelling more as a warning to women about how patriarchy strangles their power and self-reliance. Essentially, both send the same message using different media and different tones.
Race and gender are features that often determine access to power in a society. Moreover, race and gender are critical to personal identity formation, just as they locate an individual in the stratifications of the society.
Sandra Cisneros's short story "Woman Hollering Creek," and "Still I Rise," a poem by Maya Angelou both make statements about race, power, and gender in America.
Author Backgrounds: Cisneros is a Chicano author and Maya Angelou is an African-American author and poet.
Brief Text Summaries: "Woman Hollering Creek" touches on issues like domestic violence and the subjugation of women. "Still I Rise" celebrates black female identity in a culture that is both racist and sexist.
Thesis: Although different in both form and intent, Cisneros's "Woman Hollering Creek" and Angelou's "Still I Rise" both reveal the intersections between race, power, and gender in American society.
Topic Sentence 1: The intersection between gender, race, and power is one of the most salient themes in both Cisneros and Angelou, as both write from the perspective of minority females.
Focus on Cisneros
Example 1: " ... there isn't very much to do except ... to watch the latest telenovela episode and try to copy the way the women comb their hair, wear their makeup," (p. 220).
Here, the author shows how women have few strong role models and thus only learn their position in society from male-dominated discourse.
Example 2: "Maximiliano who was said to have killed his wife ... when she came at him with a mop. I had to shoot, he had said -- she was armed," (p. 225).
Cisneros is uniquely concerned with the way patriarchy and sexism can lead to domestic violence.
Focus on Angelou
Example 1: "Does my sassiness upset you?"
For Angelou, it is important for women to be unafraid of being "sassy," confident, and sure of themselves.
Example 2: "Do you want to see me broken? Bowed head and lowered eyes?"
Here, the poet uses the question form to antagonize those who would believe that women should be subservient, especially women of color.
Topic Sentence 2: Angelou capitalizes on the form of poetry to convey empowerment, using rhythm and rhyme schemes, whereas Cisneros employs the short story to encapsulate the systemic problem of misogyny. Angelou's narrator has already achieved the goal of self-empowerment, whereas the protagonist of "Woman Hollering Creek" fails and suffers the consequences.
Focus on Angelou
Example 1: "Does my sexiness upset you? / Does it come as a surprise / That I dance like I've got diamonds / At the meeting of my thighs?"
The rhyming here presents a powerful musicality that parallels the content of the lines about dancing.
Example 2: As Higashida (2011) points out, Angelou's popular success is based on her ability to use the universal form of poetry to show how patriarchy and colonialism share much in common in terms of abuse of power and systematic oppression.
Focus on Cisneros
Example 1: The form of story is integral to the culture of indigenous people, which is why Cisneros's chosen form is significant in establishing the main themes of the story (Garcia, 2014).
It is significant that Cisneros chooses the storytelling format, which traditionally had allowed women to have positions of power in their community as repositories of cultural knowledge and transmitters of that knowledge.
Example 2: "Was Cleofilas just exaggerating as her husband always said? It seemed the newspapers were full of such stories," (p. 225).
The author ironically juxtaposes the traditional art of storytelling to preserve cultural identity with the "stories" in the news about domestic violence.
Topic Sentence 3: The intent of both "Woman Hollering Creek" and "Still I Rise" is to encourage women of color to empower themselves and resist succumbing to patriarchal social norms. However, Angelou phrases her message in a positive and optimistic light, whereas Cisneros uses traditional storytelling as a warning to both women and men about the pitfalls of patriarchy.
On Cisneros:
Example 1: "Maintaining native cultures and traditions ... is a form of political as well as personal resistance to continuing oppression,"...
Sandra Cisneros's short story "Woman Hollering Creek," and "Still I Rise," a poem by Maya Angelou both make statements about race, power, and gender in America. Cisneros is a Chicano author and Maya Angelou is an African-American author and poet. Brief Text Summaries: "Woman Hollering Creek" touches on issues like domestic violence and the subjugation of women. "Still I Rise" celebrates black female identity in a culture that is both racist and
Down These Mean Streets believe that every child is born a poet, and every poet is a child. Poetry to me was always a very sacred form of expression. (qtd. In Fisher 2003) Introduction / Background History Born Juan Pedro Tomas, of Puerto Rican and Cuban parents in New York City's Spanish Harlem in 1928, Piri Thomas began his struggle for survival, identity, and recognition at an early age. The vicious street
Our semester plans gives you unlimited, unrestricted access to our entire library of resources —writing tools, guides, example essays, tutorials, class notes, and more.
Get Started Now